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Peace and Plenty Forever by ~dnmph:icondnmph:



I hear the pitter-patter of rain on the sidewalk

The sun is a flaming basin
The sky’s as calm as death
The world is in chaos
And I’m in Love

I see the sky shrivel and die

I know already how it all will end
The sun will fall from the sky
The lightless sun
Kicked out of it’s home, left to live with mortals

I smell her presence
I feel the area around me give a leap of joy

The crying dirt of the sky, of no concern to me
The shrieks of the king matter nothing
She’s crying out her ears, bleeding from lack of pain
I sooth her, console her, I press her gently closer

I taste perfume like angels dancing in my mind

All around me are the wordless shouts
‘Animals are people too!’
None of it matters in the slightest
I’m as at home as Caesar in Rome

I feel her warmth against me

Her toes wave at me, beckoning me to come closer
I obey

Lost in the chaotic peace of bako-maru
And she Loves me too
Life is over before it begins
Boko-maru with my baby, lord ain't it sweet

The sky
At peace in undeath gives one final whimper
Before falling into a deep sleep
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Author's Comments

Wrote this one a few weeks back

I'm dreaming of someone going through a rough time

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:iconpatienceofpaper:
It seems to be different from our usual style. I like this very much indeed, I love the way it's got very complicated metaphors and then like simpler lines, brilliant contrast. Tis a good peom, well done. :D

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She may have wished her life away, but in the end, she won.
:icondnmph:
:) thank you
I really like this one too :P

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We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different!
:iconsparrow69:
are you sure that you were only dreaming?

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Its a secret that no one tells. One day its heaven, one day its hell.Its no fairy tale. Take it from me, thats the way love's supposed to be.
:icondnmph:
Hehe, perhaps thinking of it while I am awake too, just a little... :P

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We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different!
:iconsparrow69:
thats what i thought

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Its a secret that no one tells. One day its heaven, one day its hell.Its no fairy tale. Take it from me, thats the way love's supposed to be.

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